Let's Review Your Games — Ep. 012

guys it's snowing outside it never snows uh in South Carolina it's beautiful it's snowing I didn't realize it would be that much so pretty all right come on in where's the chat there's nobody in the chat come on anybody oh okay we got somebody good okay hey today's going to be fun we're going to be uh playing three of your games and by the way if you want to submit your game follow me on overx at Thomas brush Dev and you submit your game anytime well I ask you to um and then I'll play the game so today we're playing three games uh I can't wait to share them with you do not vote for the games yet wait for me to finish playing the games and yeah it's going to be a lot of fun it's going to be a lot a lot a lot a lot of fun and what's cool about these live streams and I think you guys it's funny because you know you a lot of you have been showing up more and more for these live streams and I think it's

because it's really helpful I mean it's helpful to all of us um but I think it's helpful for you guys to see constructive criticism for a steam page right so we're going to go through trailers we're going to go through thumbnails we're going to go through the description and the hook of the game and then we'll play the demo and we'll sort of give a package deal review of the demo and the goal is to help the developers and help them fine-tune their marketing and also their approach to their their demo and the truth is is a demo at the end of the day a demo is a marketing tool that's why we release demos we don't release demos because we're nice we're not trying to be nice and give people free stuff because we're nice we're releasing demos because we want their money right and so we're gonna we're gonna we're GNA figure out the best way to craft your demo and your steam page to make you some money because that's the the the goal okay hey

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um it's not too far off I mean it's there's a lot of it's pretty expensive honestly all right let's let's take a look at shadow of Nottingham's um steam page you know it's funny I I just started feeling like I got a head cold I could I sound like I've got a head cold I didn't realize it um let me go ahead and pull this up here so you can see my beautiful face and let's let's get started so what are we going to do here guys we' got three games and what we're going to do is we're going to take a look at each one their steam pages and then also play the demos so Robin Hood shadow of Nottingham I think that's a cool name um I guess it' be pretty hard to call it Robin Hood so I think shadow of notingham this is this title actually is pretty great um hard to read that shadow of ninham that's hard to read and these arrows kind of bug me what I would

do for this logo is let me show you guys logos you want to make sure they look really really good from far away and I'll show you why this doesn't look good far away I'm G to open up Photoshop what I learned in school was your logo should look amazing this big it should also look amazing this big right uh well actually let me see here this big and then this big um so let's go ahead and open up Photoshop here why do I have my window open it's freezing let me turn my heater on and by the way that's how I make games uh if there's an inefficiency you don't solve the inefficiency you just add on another feature um that's exactly what I just did with actually really like the Cool Breeze though but I like the heat hitting my foot um okay so let's go ahead and talk about this logo here um I would definitely consider let me see if I can zoom in here and grab a a little bit more no

it's fine we're just going to do this for now um I would consider moving those arrows to a place that's not so jarring um that is it's just weird to me right there so what I would do is I would take this I would move it up here like that and then I would move this over here oops like it got struck through right now one of the tricks here that you can do is you can have this one behind the r and then you can have that one in front of the D okay so you could do this like that right that down there I'm going to remove I thought we removed that yeah and then I would scale this up to match the exact width of Robin Hood I love Robin Hood by the way

okay okay so let's take a look here if that worked um just pretend it's white uh but that's that's what I would do do you see do you guys see how that looks so much more professional um I would I would definitely reconsider the kerning here or the letter spacing um I would move that over just a bit to give me some room right so got some letter spacing issues wow it's so beautiful I can hear the snow hitting the window sill all right is that better guys is Thomas right as usual always right never wrong so that's that's the idea something like that I'm going to kill this so that's what I would do with that logo um you could even if you really really really really really really really wanted to you could take the arrow and run it all the way through

the problem is it looks like a really long Arrow but when you do that it makes more sense you know um but let's go ahead and keep going here so and then I would I would I would probably get rid of the arrows well it's fine it's fine um okay I think the hook is is pretty evident here uh I think showing your hook is really important in the thumbnail but let's let's read the text and that's going to give us an idea of the hook and then we're going to see if that hook is reflected in everything else liberate Nottingham from the dark alliances of Prince John and the daring Outlaw Robin Hood problem with this story hook who knows the problem with this story hook the problem is is that everybody knows this story most people do and so it's kind of like why would I play this if I know what the ending is going to be so you just told me a story that I already know if I were judik games when what I would do is I would say Robin

Hood but blank okay so Robin Hood but I'm a fox that's what Disney did sorry Robin Hood but um I use farts Robin Hood but I'm in a wheelchair you know there's so many things you could do with Robin Hood to make it work or or to make it more unique um now if there's a if there's a mechanical hook that's great and we'll we'll we'll see if there is stick to the Shadows of the forest explore okay so I think Robin Hood but stealth it works it's not it's not a huge deviation from Thief though it's just like it's Thief but with Robin Hood and I don't know if that's a strong enough salty enough hook if you made Robin Hood um like a cat or something it'd be so much more hooky I'm not saying that that's makes it a good

game I'm just saying that that's makes it easier to Market Robin Hood but as a father Robin Hood but with magic yep um okay anyway stick to the Shadows of the forest explore the secrets of ning Hamshire fight the enemies of King Richard gain the favor this is a lot of descriptive things I would just pick the one thing stick to the Shadows I would this is what I would do judik I would say stick to the shadows and liberate Nottingham from the dark alliances of Chris John as the daring Outlaw Robin Hood and then I that's fine keeping that there although it's right here

right um generally it should be it should be down here some like fantasy RPG stuff it should be right here um I really that's what I would do it's stealth in Robin Hood that's your hook so I would just say stick to the Shadows stick to the shadows and liberate nodding ham from the dark alliances from Prince John as the daring Outlaw Robin Hood now again that's that's your mechanical hook your mechanical Hook is Robin Hood so you have a bow and arrow but stealth so stealth game with like an arrow I guess um I would hope that there's some kind of mechanic here that makes this fresh and unique now there's no mechanic that's fresh and unique in the Twisted Tower demo we've talked about this yesterday but there's nothing that is um where is it there's nothing that's fresh or unique in the Twisted Tower demo

except except there is such a strong visual uniqueness that I can get away with and I believe this to be true we we'll see what the full release is but we can look at the demo here I have 520 very positive reviews 92% yet I released a mid-2000s basic generic shooter why did I get good reviews why did people show up because there's a strong strong flavor that is being combined with something we know so you take something you know and then you add a Twist right so when it comes to the Robin Hood game is there enough of a visual change is there enough of a unique theme or story to put on top of a basic stealth game and in my opinion right now not so much now we'll see if there's additional mechanical Hooks and visual hooks that can solve that problem for us does that make

sense so far let's watch the trailer [Music] okay so nothing is being said here I'm just seeing visuals I have no idea what this game is none of this makes any sense to me um you need to tell me what the hooks are Robin Hood stealth open world now none of those are really hooks because none of them are super unique and a hook should be unique in some way for it to be classified as a hook or at least really really engaging so if you were to do if you were to put

words on the screen it would be um play as Robin Hood in this in a stealth game basically that I would I would put that right up in Center at the beginning of this trailer the music is pretty poor as well I would give it like a c minus it's kind of got like a nauseating feeling so what I would do it's that it's that uh tin whistle or whatever you call it or Scott Scottish whistle just guys spend the money spend the money to get something from epidemic sound epidemic sound has some of the greatest Scottish like or Medieval music um one of the best ones is Bonnie I I'll show you in a sec Scottish Bonnie Grace so listen to this watch watch this this this is how important music

[Music] is one sec one sec where's Bonnie Grace usually there's a ton of albums where did they go they're gone all right let's let's uh look for hold on I gotta log in let me see here oh no that's my uh that's my fake YouTube account I have a fake one for uh all of my uh nonsense I watch on YouTube and we all watch nonsense on YouTube don't we all all right let's see if we can find a good track here um epic

or no no no mysterious medieval so that song that I was listening to it it was like this Medieval Times la la la la la Medieval Times la la la la la Medieval [Music] Times that's how this sounds it's like it's not telling me anything the music should tell me what this is there's Bonnie [Music] Grace this feels a little bit mysterious

yeah mystery I mean it sounds a little bit uh Eastern yeah we need to have a sneaky Vibe let's find another one [Music] here's another one if it's a it's a stealth game this is what we need sneaking have voice heartbeat sneaking through the Shadows yeah

as opposed [Music] to yeah we need to we need to re re uh readjust the tone of the music okay um what else we got screenshots look good Bloom is a little heavy scatter is a little high um I would consider removing that um okay let's go ahead and hit play here take a look yall ready and by the way I remember guys at the end of today's video we're live stream we're going to vote on the best game so be you know pay attention um so that you can give a really honest vote at the end okay all right let's go

so this is a totally different logo than the steam page make sure we adjust that um there's no music on this page like look how much how much more professional this feels watch [Music] watch something like that you know [Music] that is [Music] awesome yeah it just gets it it's like a it's like um it's an appetizer it's letting you know hey this is what we're about to jump into this new adventure give me some music in in 1192 King Richard lionhart besieged Jaffa he sent him man to breach the walls and kill Saladin that man's

name was Robin Hood so we know all this right we we know the story generally but when Robin Hood entered the keep he saw Prince John scheming with yeah Saladin blah as Darkness befell the drowning man he saw what appeared to be a bishop who said to him save the soul of England save the soul of England okay UI feels very different than the rest of the the game style um I would consider doing a very clean UI as opposed to this sort of half skew morphic kind of feels like a flash game um well I don't believe it look much well I don't believe it look much he's alive I would consider not all caps come on man wake up easy now now you look like you've fallen off a cliff

I'm Little John what's your name I'm called Robin Hood well lots of choices here Robin Hood what do you do Robin Hood well let's have a look at you and make sure you can get to your feet okay we'll talk about UI in a sec the the clickiness feels great I like the Ambient sound of the wind in the trees um okay good my major skills stealth lock smith lock picking and warfare sure well Robin you don't seem too badly hurt still you do well to come by our camp all right right we got to find

will all right so let's find where the camp is I met Little John in the forest at Sherwood and he told me will he and he told me will scat loock it's hard to read this I would change the text this this kind of text is good for like headers and titles it's not good for readability though um yeah so I would I would change this to like a clean gamand or if you wanted to do a sand serap Fant something like a I mean even open SS or a helvetic is fine I met Little John in the forest of Sherwood he told me blah blah blah BL leader of his band could give me some supplies and equipment he said to find will I should follow the path downhill and turn left of the woods is there a map there's no map which is problematic for an open world game okay I'm stuck can't [Music] move so I can only move with the inventory open

can't move there we go okay this area is under construction lots of under construction wow okay so I need to go down the path and to the left okay uh the running sound is really jarring I would just get rid of it entirely if you're not going to have the right sound so all I hear is it sounds like I'm wearing wooden shoes but it really sounds like the ground is made of wood also the sound of the trees are just there you could tell there's a loop so let me try and show you a better sort of approach to Ambient sound um I can't really mute it though I'll show you after we're done so we can't mute the sound so okay uh graphically

you know I've never I've never really been a fan of games that refuse to use texture unless it's unless it's hyper stylized I don't know why we would want to not use texture I would add I would I would use texture uh personally left into the woods sorry I'm getting lost epidemic sound does not allow you to put it in your games epidemic sound you have to pay for it you have to pay a fee if you're going to put it in games or films you can use it for YouTube videos but if you're going to use it for films or trailers or whatever uh well trailers are fine if they're on your YouTube channel but if you want to use epidemic sound you need to and you want to use it in your game it's going to be like 600

bucks a pop and also guys by the way one final thing here about epidemic sound and also artless doio and any other paon five and all these other games or all these other websites that offer music please remember that it's going to deinen divize YouTubers to play your game if that song is not universally licensed so that's why it's important to potentially consider hiring someone to write music mus so that you can exploit those songs anywhere and everywhere if you if you buy a song from from epidemic sound every single YouTuber who plays your game is potentially going to get demonetized for that video and guess what they're not going to play your game all right hey bud who are you have you come to join my band think you've got what it takes I'm Ren Hood your man told me you could get me some supplies do I look like a running a church Hospital make

yourself useful if you want supplies three of our men went hunting and haven't come back for a few days go see if you could find them and if they're dead bring back their gear all right let's take a look e so where am I going quests gone poaching I met will scotlock he told me to go find three of his men who went hunting for deer and haveen it come back okay ah crap there we go so I'm just going to follow the path and assume that's where I need to go I think a map would be really helpful here like a quest map like cuz you you can get so loss so quickly it'll blow your mind it'll blow

your mind as a developer how quickly people playing your game are going to get lost they're going to end up spending an hour just running through these Woods if they don't have a map and then you're going to go what I thought I I thought it was clear wasn't clear not to them not to them some people are like o I want to go over here let's go well good it's blocked off I'm getting some frame rate issues um it's definitely the the draw distance I'm I'm curious if there's lods being utilized here so far the environment feels fairly Bland um it's not super unique um it's just terrain with some trees and some rocks um so far I haven't been able to find anybody who's on a hunt to me my impression is is that this game is way too big for an indie game it

just seems like something that won't get finished because it's it's a massive open world game I would I would much rather the developer focus and create something very small very tight granular a singular Focus like I'm going to sneak through set very hyperfocused forests that are surrounded with this Stone point A to point B beat that level move on to the next move on to the next move on to the next keep it very clean small tight gorgeous art the open World stuff is tough it's tough with Indies the sound of running keeps playing when I jump okay I can't find anybody I have no idea where to go I'm going to assume I go over

here I would definitely definitely reconsider the open world approach here like there's so there's just too much it's too much to fill in here and wait what are we doing we're creating expectations now the player's going to be like okay so this is going to be what a 60 hour game because they're going to play an open world it's it's an open world Skyrim type game and then and then they see all the the the lack of textures and they think is something broken but it's that's not that's not really true though it's not broken that's intended and that's because it's an indie game um so with Indie Games you have to set expectations and one of the best ways to set set expectations as an indie is price but when you don't have price to

show you set it with the look and you set it with the genre the moment you introduce an open world game to the steam Marketplace even with as a steam page that's not released players are going to have expectations I struggle with that you know my games are I've got a first-person shooter and people expect certain things and fortunately I think we've we dodged a bullet no pun intended cuz people seem to really like it and they get it they get that it's a mid-2000s shooter so they have Lowered Expectations which is a good thing for Indies um but um with this you got to be real careful you got to be really careful yeah so I'm completely lost at this point I don't know what to do where to go this is it's definitely a game with massive amount of scope to fill this in million dollar

game I could be wrong obviously maybe I'm just missing the point and I haven't uh I just I wasn't reading something properly but to me it looks like if you want to make this game Rock Solid and marketable there is so much to fill in this is just an I feel like I'm in like limbo because it's so empty and cold um there's just too much to fill in for IND game okay yeah it said there was a map if I click on world map but there's nothing there so there's no there's no directions there's no way to know where to go so ultimately I think it needs a lot of work um um and I can't quite figure out what to

do but I feel like we spent a pretty good amount of of time on that game um so let's move on to the next game do not vote for anything yet let's let's wrap up and move on to two more games um and by the way those of you just joining us just remember you can join fulltime game dep below for 25% off you're going to learn how to make Indie Games fulltime from your bedroom from an indie game developer like me um it's for real like it's frustrating because it's like I I I'm trying to I really do want to teach people how to how to get funded and how to how to turn into game development into a full-time gig it's not easy it's not easy but the course I teach everything that I've learned and everything I've done um I've I've signed three publisher agreements I'm currently published by 3D Realms um I've worked with Serenity Forge armor games I was just featured by Vice Last Week um I just released My Demo last week hit the steam front page um the demo has 550 very positive reviews or 5

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art there's nothing in in this capsule that tells me what the Hook is so let's read the the sentence and see if we can find out what the hook is I don't like uh when it starts with the the title I can see the title right here the title's everywhere why are we wasting space and time thas is a Dungeon Crawler RPG featuring traditional Rog likee and turn-based gameplay okay that there's no hook there you just told me something that is right here um so maybe put that at the last sentence let's start with the hook command a party of bearers of the brand what is that does anyone know what that means command a party of bearers of the brand drawn into a none of this makes sense to me so we've got something that makes way too much sense that pretty much everyone knows because they can just read it here and then you've got a sentence that makes zero sense um recruit while exploring the labyrinth

in Hope of finding a way out and its Secrets will be revealed as you Del delve deeper so none of this makes any sense to me now I need you guys to vote because I don't trust my own opinion 10 out of 10 makes complete sense one out of 10 makes zero sense okay give me one to 10 10 out of 10 amazing sense I'm sorry 10 out of 10 is amazing sense one out of 10 is makes no sense at all um let's let's see here Ze says does anyone read the capsule text because I almost never do I go straight to straight to screenshots and trailers let's pretend you're correct and everybody does that the goal with this I've said this before the reason I start here is because if you can't write this you can't do any of this if you can't cannot write this this paragraph it's going to be really hard

for you to make a trailer and make a thumb a capsule art and screenshots and a steam page in general and it's going to be hard for you to Market it because this right here this should be the ultimate s the ultimate distilled down ingredients of what your what your game is and why people should buy it so if you can't write this you're going to struggle doing the rest so I I I love to start here even if maybe we agree that lots of people won't read it okay so four out of 10 four out of 10 three out of 10 eight out of 10 from Rai please inform me three out of 10 four out of 10 I'm still Jason says I'm still trying to read the title th Aster I actually like the title I think it's really strange it's a dungeon craw I understand that it's a Dungeon Crawler I don't know what this means command a party of bearers of the brand drawn into the vast Labyrinth recruit while exploring the Labyrinth and hope of finding a way out on I just I don't

understand yeah I I I maybe we need to watch the trailer and then we can figure out a better way to write that but it looks really cool though [Music] recruit the Branded ones the [Music] PO I would start with this this this is the hook [Music]

[Music] it's wild music wild wild music um I mean I'm not g to I I think by the way I thought that was a really cool trailer really interesting Graphics look amazing crazy skill there if it were me I would I would not use that [Music] music I would try and find something that's more driving um

but with more of a [Music] upbeat do have chasing yeah crime scene as well I know this sounds weird but crime scene usually has some cool like arpeg arpeggiated stuff [Music] I know this doesn't work I'm just thinking about the Rhythm [Music] [Music]

[Music] yeah but I get I get why they used the music they did it Ma it definitely matches the look of it it's just nauseating it might be it might be one of those games where it's purposefully dense and hyperbolic and metaphoric and meta um so let's go ahead and hit play here and see how it is I you know fair warning here I am not good at these role playing games or whatever

turn base games but let's go ahead and hit play here yeah I agree that the original was better just wanted to see what it could be like with something that wasn't so uh crunchy but this is awesome listen to this sound isn't that great [Music] [Music] nice there we go sorry the steam video was started playing uh help basic movement welcome to the demo of theaster you in control of a party of the Branded lost in a labyrinth use WD

keys to move your party q and E to turn time does not pass while you idle when wait time does not pass while you idle oh cool so time happens when you move when you take action including movement everything in The Labyrinth takes action as well you can I love that you can enter or exit combat mode by pressing the space key so q and E is turn oh cool it's just keyboard all right by pressing space interact with the the interface using Mouse you can exit this tutorial other menus and panels by clicking X at the top right corner should you want to review this or any other press help in the top right corner of the screen oh I love this feels really good um awesome woo this looks amazing it is so beautiful feels great to move who you scared me okay let's fight

Sasha attack Soldier attack Sasha dealing 18 damage Sasha attack Soldier dealing 29 damage let's do it again senel strike got him this feels so good I just want to explore the whole thing you right buddy I love this how did they achieve this look uh oh can I collect things

I think color theory wise this is amazing what is that o perform basic attack a slightly slower attack with melee weapon that also allows the attacker to defend until the beginning of the next turn let's do it music is great honestly it feel oh cool there's a map up there you could see the enemies coming in this is great it I definitely wouldn't play it just because I don't know I I just don't I never grew up playing these games and I don't know how to play them to be completely honest but I definitely know there's a place or a market for this looks amazing

buddy I don't know what that means I wish I understood these games I really do got him [Music] whoa it's one of those uh games that requires a little bit of intelligence which I do not have but I can oh you can click to to open things got it

what's that there was barrels and stuff over here what is this what how are you attacking me I can't kill him oh I can kill him femur breaker UI is awesome Graphics are awesome color theory is awesome Ambience and music is awesome I mean it's rock solid I think it's just it's so hard for me to review the gameplay because it's not it's just not my thing um visually though it's just incredible do does anyone in the chat like these or in the yeah in the chat like these kind of games say yes or no if this is kind of your kind of game yes it's your kind of game no not

really it's a patient game very patient which I don't have hello you're scaring me and I don't know if I want to participate bro what do I do crush and inac well he's so big I shouldn't Miss right let's go are you serious so what does this mean over here guys I I'm I'm being dead serious I'm I'm too dumb for these games what does this mean over here B boo and rot G oh that's my character

Buu and Sasha what is this these games are too intelligent for me yes yes yes yes no no no so it's about it looks like it's about 50% of you would not play this kind of game actually no it looks like 60% yeah ground says I can respect it but it's not my type of game yeah it's it's hard for me to play this honestly because I just feel so dumb and it's not like I I understand that it's easy to easy to grasp but I've never played these games ever I always avoided turn-based games always because I just want to I want to run around and explore and jump on platforms and spam shoot and break things that's why like Twisted Tower is the way it is it's like like you break balloons and boxes and loot crap and jump all over the place a lot of people think the jump

height is too high in Twisted Tower and I'm like nope but that's what I want I want the player to be free and just have a plenty of uh space to be add there is no room in this game to be add and that's obviously intended but for me I can't I just can't focus I don't even know what I was doing I totally forgot um so we're just going to try and get this guy die okay you're dead you're gonna die dude how where's your health so bad at this stuff I guess he died a new environment that was perfect that was totally necessary although I don't know where I came from like it's like I'm just in a

different scene all of a sudden okay well it looks awesome it's gorgeous the mood is incredible um it's going to be very very hard for me to rate the game playay uh because how do I get out of here it's going to be hard for me to rate the game playay because I don't understand it at all um and that's because I told you guys I'm too stupid uh next game Alien Black Ops all right alien Black Ops this action-packed shooter this is hard to see because of this uh I know exactly what is going on but it's hard to tell look at this guys how many of you can tell what's going on right here at this

size okay you need to you need to at least be able to understand what you're looking at at zero or at you know 100% I said zero because control zero is zero control Z is 100% Zoom but for people who are on their phones or let's say they're they're just not they got a big screen and it's zoomed out or something or you know I don't know what the thumb looks like if it's that when it's down here then we got a problem because I can't see what that is um it's very blurry there's a lens flare there it's just the and and also those mountains there's there's just no Silhouettes being created here so I can't see what's going on once you once you look close enough you see oh it's a helicopter a UFO oh that's a cool hook helicopters versus UFOs that's a really cool hook I actually really really like that um I think the thumbnail doesn't communicate that because it's blurry and

there's a lens flare U but that's a really strong hook I think that's a strong hook aliens versus helicopters that's awesome this action-packed shooter puts you in control of an elite military pilot on a classified mission after a secret operation you recover alien wreckage wait what oh after a secret operation to recover alien wreckage goes wrong you must rescue downed soldiers and harness alien Tech cool I love that uncover their Sinister plan and stop The Invasion before it's too late this feels so classic I love it that's great I don't really have an issue with any of this it feels kind of cheesy in all the right ways brilliant let's watch the trailer okay if we're going to be cheesy I would definitely start this with some where in the somewhere in Nevada and it's like

it's like that classic 9s it types somewhere in Nevada as opposed to this this is weird this this text looks like it's a kids like kids TV show it looks like something I might see in a um PJ mask you know so I would I would I would stick to that classic CIA FBI by Black Ops 1995 that Vibe okay let's go where's the sounds there we go okay go move forward come

on this is really cool that's awesome I love that oh the UI or this text is so bad but this looks so cool the UI is good those those text title cards are really bad help me that's awesome okay so the way that this trailer is is it's dragging it is dragging so let me explain we've got a really cool looking game that I just love the concept I think it's a really cool concept definitely gives me like uh I don't know

GameCube Xbox Vibes um something you might buy in 2003 you know so I'm going to go ahead and search for this trailer uh Alien Black Ops and at the end of this stream I think what I might do is edit it a little bit to show you guys how you could make this so much more fun so I'm going to download it really quick and we might edit this to help out the the devs because I feel like that trailer is not and if you ever want to know if a trailer is really effective just see if it's performing well on YouTube you know does it have a ton of views um even like 10,000 views you know if it doesn't then people aren't really connecting to the trailer and I'm looking at the trailer right now on YouTube and it has 1.9 th000 views after three months so there's something missing from the trailer in my opinion where YouTube is just not pushing it to people uh to watch um I wonder if I wonder if I'm going to bite my tongue

here how's the Twisted Tower trailer doing let me look here yeah so in I mean I have a lot of subscribers so that doesn't really count um but it's got like 36,000 views in seven days which actually isn't very good I mean it's fine I wish it was more honestly um let's see here okay uh what am I doing I forgot what I was doing yeah the trailer uh the trailer is officially downloaded I'm tempted to just go ahead and open up Premiere and show you guys what I mean yeah we're GNA open up Premiere sorry guys you're G to love it you're going to love it you're going to learn a ton um so let's go ahead and do that let me make sure that I can share my my screen with

you make sure no business numbers are showing up or anything like that you got to be careful when you're streaming because I you know you you uh I have all my business documents and schedules and accounting stuff sometimes open so I got to close it all we're good here get rid of my notepad stuff we're good and let's go ahead and open up premier and I want to show you guys how quickly we can make this so much more fun are you guys ready I'm I'm going to open up a new project here give me a sec I'll share my screen in just a sec promise um create our document here and let's open up Premiere and I'm going to drag in the trailer and I'm going to show you that music my hope is to show you that music is pretty much going to solve the problem okay so here's here's our trailer

notice how and this is classic you know developer trailer the developer rightfully so is so proud of what they've made they should be this is this looks really cool but they hang too long on things so people are kind of like just okay you know let's go let's go so we live in the add Tik Tock era and so I'm going to embrace that as a developer uh and I'm not going to be you know ashamed of it I'm just going to say look this is how people are now and so you're going to die or you're going to try and fit your trailer into that new societal mold and don't be ashamed to do it let's find a new song

[Music] this is kind of cool we're going to just do sci-fi cinematic sci-fi shut up that's horrible

[Music] let's go to Art list art list tends to have better more cinematic music so let's go to .io we're going to take a look at some music here um we're going to type in sci-fi give me a sec I promise I'll show my screen all right those of you just joining us just remember you can check out fulltime game dep below get 25% off my massive program which teaches you how to basically turn your bedroom into an indie game studio and do it full-time can't make any promises I can just tell you what I've done join 4,500 students worldwide get 25% off for the next five days [Music] [Music]

[Music] so close could we get away with synthwave can we get away with synth wave I think we might be able to let's see if we can get away with synth wave because there's some sweet synth wve stuff on epidemic [Music] cinematic [Music] Sy no we are so close [Music]

that's cool that's awesome and I like this one because we can we can have these swells here [Music] and then cuts and then action so what I like to do is I like to let the music dictate the trailer um so basically what you do is you say okay I know I have my footage I also know I want it to be a minute long I want to start with the the action immediately okay so something like [Music] this and then we want want to get to the action right now b boom right there

cut and then we're going to cut to some big action here oh that is so cool I love that I might start here although this is good too I like the swell but we're going to go straight to full action okay watch this oh that's great actually we're going to go to right here so we can basically say one two three there right on one here and cut to this so we're going to cut to this I promise this is going to make sense we start with big action okay we're trying to get them the viewer immediately engaged

nice let's drop down and drop okay we're going to drop here to sort of do something story so we've got their attention here with some crazy cool action we're going to stop here for some story or explanation narrative explanation so right here is good we'll drop down explore UFOs and helicopters and save the universe well and boom right there so let's find the biggest moment where was that cool drop okay here we go and that's going to last for two three four and bang right there and we'll stop right here okay so this is the rough this is the rough outline remember it's a minute

long start with the action do a drop about 5 seconds after the action and then give us more action great layout for a trailer so the music will dictate everything we'll use swells to create those transitions we'll do a swell here we're going to do a drop here see if we can find a good spot for a drop we might be able to use this intro

[Music] piece okay we'll drop right there okay here we go you just want to give a break to the play uh the viewer swell in back to normal throw a transitional sound here okay we're going to just transition to these various different beats this one right here me turn the music down or the the master down

swell swell SW awesome that is what I'm freaking talking about we're going to cut in right here actually um yeah we're g to go it's going to be a pretty quick transition immediately Bang let's put a swell here then we're going to do a uh like an explosion or something um we're going to go to sound effects here we're just going to have some cool explosions and we're going to figure out how to make it work right I start sound music first Transitions and epic cinematic hits second and then bring the footage in to sort of uh justify the sounds right um so we're going to do an explosion here and we I talked about this yesterday it is okay to use sound effects that are

not in your game for your trailer that's awesome I love that and a bunch of cool Sci-Fi Sounds and stuff you can use that as well electricity and sound is everything those kind of sounds do you know what I'm talking about no we're going to justify This Promise so let's hit it right here okay we're going to put this transition here like that and then we're gonna blend these two I love

that speed this one up make it higher pitched we could even low pass this I'm sorry uh yeah low pass it I don't know if it's going to work but we're going to try it I kind of want this to go it sound like you're underwater for a second so we're going to do that with a low pass let's try this [Music] out where's the one Let's Move That What's happen yeah it's right there there's the one I was wondering where it was um and where's the one for this yeah it's right

here you see what we did there guys this this low pass thing is one of my favorite things to do watch this okay we're going to go with a with a pretty heavy cut off and we're going to have it come up like this exponentially okay ready [Music] here it [Music] comes so we need something big here I really want the most epic part of that song so let's find it that needs to be the biggest moment I think this will have to do we'll do an

explosion oh I freaking love that dude that is so cool okay so we've got our sounds or our music guiding the trailer now if if you're wondering why I'm spending so much time without even editing the video that's because what we just created here is a sketch and that sketch is going to dictate the details that we fill in right it's so with with editing a trailer for me uh it's just like sketching a an illustration okay um and so you want to sketch with with any illustration you start with a rough sketch and then you fill it in right so let's start with the

uh here we go we're going to start with something that sounds like this that sounds like an alien to me so we're going to start with this we're going to start right here we're going to use that as our footage we're going to fill it in with sounds later right here is the next clip cut guys don't be afraid to cut quickly I like that better this right here this is way better another one

there I kind of want to give it more context here yeah this one right let's see what other clip do I have of the of the big this big UFO and and then we could maybe we could show this preparing for takeoff you know prepare for takeoff and then we cut to the and then we drop down got it so that was too Lou too loud I actually like that not there

we're going to reverse this and make it look like they're they're they're starting to take off speed reverse watch this guys so they're going to start taking off and I know that's kind of this is basically what I would do if I was the developer I'd say I need footage of getting uh of the plane taking off so it makes it feel like we're starting something guys every trailer should tell a story right so the story we're going to tell is UFOs are coming get ready to fight and then right here we're going to do something with the fight this doesn't need to be here there needs to be something else I think um we need to show the story of the alien threat arriving do I have any other footage you know what I'm going to cut this pretty

quick and we're going to drop we're gonna we're g to get pretty quick to the drop here so look we we've basically said aliens are coming let's begin the fight swell oh that's a good one right there do you guys see what music is doing for this oh this is a great clip right here boom and we we need to see him explode

quick right on the beat boom explosion is going to be right here boom boom so do you see how we went one two one cut so for those of you who who have no music theory at all this is a 4 four time signature right so one 2 4 1 4 1 2 3 4 1 2 three 4 boom 2 three four Cut 2 three 4 cut two three four cut right all right so let's see here how does this look yep okay let's get a the sound of a helicopter it's going to make sense promise

[Applause] [Music] guys we're just going to use that it's not the best but we're going to use it and then we're going to do military um soldiers yelling go go go go go go go Spearman Spearman oh my [Music] [Applause] [Music] God I don't know what that is but we're gonna see if it works I want to hear go go go go Alpha stat 34 Five ABC uh what where's the track that I need um this is awesome watch this guys swell man Swell this is going to be so cool what I

mean by swell is this watch super loud swells are exciting so here we go I'm GNA fade this in and it's G to get pretty freaking loud okay did you see that I'm telling you just some subtle [Music] yelling he really should be saying like Alpha stat go go go something like that we need to fade in right there fade in something crazy um now preferably it would be this right but I want to start with the

shot I want people to be interested um so we're going to start there and we need footage we need footage of the takeoff I need something here I need something right here we could do this we could do something like this but what I what I was saying earlier is this a threat arises from another galaxy so we could if we wanted to we could do this swell cut we're gonna cut right here we're just GNA get to it okay so it's good to it's good to drop

like that and keep it keeps viewers on their on their toes because things keep changing the tone and the mood keeps changing okay I think I've got it guys watch this you're gonna have this and then this fades in oh it's so good can you guys see it and hear it everybody everybody good are we learning a lot today hope you're learning a lot here we go ready watch this we're GNA have that fade pretty pretty smooth

okay so an ancient threat arises what is it what is the phrase revealing project an ancient threat arises from another galaxy there's too many words in my opinion so what I would do is I would say something really simple um an ancient threat um has arrived and you could do some kind of pixel font or like military font um something like this I mean I understand that this is super cheap looking but where's the freaking font hang on Ubuntu and then you could do like that neon classic green super simple and you could have it

go this is what I was talking about earlier um I want to show you how to do it um we're going to do left align but we're going to center it and we're going to do a beeping sound so like computer text or computer beeping ancient isn't in there what do you mean well I like ancient better there we go I told you something like that this is I I promise it'll look cool it's gonna give it that 90s vibe we'll speed it up but we're going to maintain we're going to try and maintain the pitch

we'll see what it does yes this right here we'll put a little bit of a glow subtle glow on it nothing crazy um the way you would do it is you would do a yeah we'll do it in a sec okay so what we're going to do here um I believe is there a way to do it here I don't know if there is um you sort of wrap it can you wrap it I can't remember mask with text no I think what we'll do here is we'll do something simple like this nothing crazy guys so this mask the text and then oops right when the sound ends we're

just going to finish the mask that's not how you spell Arrived I will fix that good so we need footage here this fades in so we really need something we need a piece of footage that we can use that's exciting and cool yeah right here we can use that one whoops what in the world um something like this here so something that's exciting but it

doesn't really say hey we're fighting yet we want to build tension here then we're going to move to this one here we're going to move this one actually over here the helicopter sound will slowly come in [Applause] [Applause] no I like the way the story was being told earlier so it's this right here that's I love seeing this cut to this explosion there this is awesome I love

this clip oh there's a good one you don't want too many weird jarring movements with trailers you want it to be pretty you don't you you want to treat it like a director would right um you want it to be the the the the you want the clips to be intentional you don't want it just like you know I don't know how to describe it one

there we go okay see this is why it's important to have a lot of different clips because we're kind of running out of material you know um this is kind of cool I guess but you got to cut quick you know otherwise people are going to get bored so yeah we've already run out of material um that's why you need you need lots of levels to show even if they're just Concepts um maybe cool shots of the helicopters going over you um blowing up uh ground enemies flying enemies like shooting the UFO that massive UFO there's a lot of clips that we need that we don't have

um I guess we haven't shown this one no we showed that one yeah we've shown I think we've shown a lot of this here we're going to pretend it's it's going to end right here okay guys and just just go with me here we're going to pretend that it's going to end right here even though it should be a minute long but this is the general idea okay

but I wanted to show you really quick before we play the game I want to show you the importance of sound okay give me just a minute sounds that you can uh get from from a sound library and just throw them into your trailer are gonna make a huge difference I promise so watch this this is GNA change everything don't rely so much on the music okay I mean rely on it to to craft the narrative but don't only just say okay well that's all we're going to use and I it's good to swell it's good to swell so we're going to do a lower one here so we're going to we're going to lower this by like 60 to 60% and it's

going to swell and then cut to here okay we'll add a little bit of Reverb there make it feel like it's not just coming out of nowhere but it's coming out of that ship um we're going to do a pretty heavy Great Hall Reverb pretty wet but pretty dry okay we need a hit sound there sci-fi explosion yeah there we go one right here I want to hear ch okay we're going to get a a a gun sound um rifle shot something like that

[Applause] okay I'll lower it I know this isn't actually the right caliber or anything like that but just hang tight okay we're gonna be very precise here okay we're gonna use our keys to look for each shot okay we got one there okay these right here so we're gonna go and by the way guys I even for me even when I record my own games and the footage and the games I'll go in and add sound later for the trailer I don't rely on the sound in the game most of the time I would say like 80% of it's fake audio okay so we got that one here don't be lazy look for each

one one right here one right here one right here so that's actually right here there and then there think we can do one here as well and then one here we're going to we're going to increase the volume of this to like that we're swelling it up we'll fade it out here we're going to duplicate this but increase it to

150 so that it we can get a different sort of sound effect here helicopter sound here this one right here a pretty loud [Applause] one there we go we're going to drag it over here get a pretty aggressive hit by the way guys when you when you cut to a totally different sound and a totally different feel it seems like it would be jarring but it's not it it it keeps the viewer engaged like this add some more shots here there's a couple more here yeah there we go oh we need a really cool electrical sound uh sci-fi

explosion there we go sci-fi explosion happens right here guys this just makes it feel like the whole thing's alive more helicopter sounds there right okay what am I missing that's cool that's cool that's cool all right you

ready okay that's a little loud there and I want some screams get out of here get out of here man Soldier screaming go go go go go all right let me see if I can do it myself am I going to wake up my daughter no she's not she's not here my my eighth month old old my eight-month-old usually goes to sleep right now but she's not here okay let's go what is this why are we setting up

audacity no I don't want to do it right now okay check one two and two go go go go go get out of here go go go okay mix and render I think we're good to go uh put it in the downloads folder is fine go go go go go and then throw that in here we'll find a good clip just a little bit of a cut right [Music] here hire a voice actor ladies and gentlemen but you get the idea okay what can we do to make this

better maybe we can do a zoom here and a glow it's not very centered so let's see if we can do this we're going to zoom it in a little bit actually it probably be best if you had it nested whoops we're going to Nest this it would be better to Nest it at 4K obviously so that it would be the right scale but what we can do here is start big I'll fix the text one sec I know that's spelled wrong and we'll do a slow sort of there we go so that gave it sort of an accelerating down to sort of swell up with the transition an ancient threat has arrived save it and then we're going to

do watch this Nest it one more time do a blur blur it and that makes it look like it's got a glow crank up the saturation and the intensity the cont or the white I wonder why it won't do it okay whatever let's see if we can create a cool UFO sound [Music] I can't hear it why can't I hear

it but right for this and by the way for those of you who are just joining us just remember you can join fulltime Game Dev below if you like my teaching style and you want to learn how to make games from your bedroom and do it profitably you're going to learn from somebody who's actually doing it full-time uh I'm currently published by 3D Realms I actually launched my third commercial release demo uh last week um to glowing reviews actually very positive reviews 510 so far it's called Twisted Tower I've been published three times I've got um I've uh done two Kickstarter campaigns both raised over around 100,000 the first one was like 109 the other one was like 95 and that included a a post campaign for like a week but anyway um I got 4500 students worldwide I can teach you how to get a get funded with Publishers Kickstarter how to hit the steam front page I've done that several times I just did it last week so you're actually learning from somebody in the trenches who knows how to make games and Do It full time so check it out below I've had several students go full time which is really really cool so click the link below get 25% off for the next 5 days um and I'll

also shout you out tomorrow um during the live stream okay let's get this sound correct here some reason I can't hear myself playback this one and I know what you guys are thinking what is this I'm telling you it's GNA sound amazing just trust me and then it'll cut we need to make it sound kind of like a frog or something tracks add new stereo track or mono track we're going to do a pole stretch two [Music]

nope [Music] track add new monot track paste lower pitch really low Reverb on the low end yes Fade Out fade in good mono track lower the pitch track mix it render change the

speed okay [Music] there it is mix down to Mono Bast always do a pitch change

baby good change speed and [Music] Pitch are you mating and then we'll do a pul stretch underneath it [Music] track mix and render low pitch actually speed change okay we're GNA mix and match here guys

okay Electrical uh or um like gear electricity that's what I need electricity wa we definitely add some Reverb here too um I actually just like this one and then we're going to add another track that has distortion on it o tremolo [Music] yeah and Distortion that's the

phaser let's see how it [Music] sounds oh that's [Music] cool cool maybe some distortion on this one I think what I want to do is actually do the EQ on it give it a really just get get rid of the give it some mid-range and get rid of the low end and the high [Music] end there it is all right we'll do a we'll we'll we'll uh change we'll change the speed why is it not [Music]

oh I love that tail end of that sound so we're gonna use that okay so let's see here so this tail end right here that the clicking or the I like that so we're going to lower that and we're going to do cheat or we're going to change the speed significantly so it's like [Music] this little bit of thunder in there just a tiny bit because I don't like the intro of I don't like how this sounds there we go we'll use that

one for those of you who want to know how to stand out and finally get people playing your games what we're doing right now is like key I'm not just wasting time here this is everything getting people to be excited about your game and wish list it is how you sell it we're going to do a little bit of a very low a big low pitch [Music] change here we [Music] go um squealing like a squeaking what is this sound an

engine oh I love that here we go we're just going to take this and loop it track mix in render and we're going to take this Fade Out We're Not Gon to fade that out actually um we need a pitched adjustment there mix all that together and then we're going to add a little bit of a Reverb to it so it sounds like it's coming from a distance this is important I think we need to give a personality in a voice to

that one shot um it's a little bit much that's what you call it what you you call it it's too wet um fade in and then we're going to do make it low w w wo W wo change the tempo no maybe uh change speed [Music] here fade [Music] in okay what about a horn I'm going to mix my voice with the horn make it this is what halflife did really well it's like organic and it's uh and it's uh it's organic and

mechanical uh Bioshock did this too Bioshock um infinite lower that pitch and speed [Music] give it Reverb we're gon to add a little bit of Silence in order to do a long taale of Reverb you have to add a bunch of Silence re merge that together into a mono and then we're going to do a big fat Reverb [Music]

well that's kind of cool I like that I wonder if we can utilize this this is just a little too loud for me it almost sounds like it's coming from inside of like a radio which I don't [Music] love did I learn all this by just practic practicing yes everything I've learned is practice don't wait on a teacher to tell you how to do stuff just get [Music] going and I'm going to add there it sort of cuts out too quick so what you can do add one more and just drop it down [Music] [Music] Anders Edge um I was talking to Ken

LaVine about how when they two months before their launch um for BioShock nobody understood what the game was no one could play it they didn't they just didn't get it and it was the smallest things that caused the problem and so for you it could be a map you know it could be you just wall in every everything and say I'm not going to make an open world game or you if you're going to if you're going to have a demo and it's going to be open world I need to see a map 100% or else people are just going to get lost so it could be as simple as that yes I'm GNA fade this in a little bit more aggressively like [Music] this and then this [Music] all right let's see how this sounds it could be cool could be dumb but it kind of sounds like a UFO to

me here we go I hope that this was worth my time you never know I feel like if we gave it a high P or a high pass yeah a high pass we could probably cut through that I'm going to just just pretend that it's great I think it's

fine it might be cool right [Music] here nope doesn't work cut your losses guys I bet you I have the greatest idea watch this it's so funny it's called the sunk sunk cost fallacy where you invest all this time in something and you feel like you have to use it you've got to be willing to just throw crap away just throw it away even if you're live in front of you know how many people are watching right now in front of 860 people even if you're live in front of 860 people be willing to say didn't work moving on it's no big

deal so we're not going to use it and you're just going to deal with it okay guys what so that is great that's perfect that's perfect for this ancient an ancient threat has arrived you want to give a voice to the UFOs we know what humans sound like I mean it's important to add human sounds to this if we can like that go go go go go but if we can add a organic tone to these aliens so they don't just feel like machines I think that would be really cool so like this I'm going to make it low we're going to go to 60% [Music]

let's make it not that much because that sounds silly we're going to do this 50 and then add Reverb it just sounds like a teenager let's see what we can do here guys give me a sec I promise this is going to H we're gonna get this to work I need I need the sound I need something like that that sounds so dumb I'm just gonna use song from something from my own freaking game how's that um I this sound I did was so cool let me find

it some Twisted Tower it's just such a good song or a good good sound you know uh let's see here almost go go go go go drop that down add a little bit of voices here

all right you guys ready to see the final product and then we can play the game uh an elephant yeah we might be able to do an elephant that's a good [Music] idea that's kind of cool and all this time we were trying to use a baby that is it good job that's awesome who who said that um whoever said that great job uh that that's awesome that's exactly what we want let's throw in some Reverb though um crank up the volume you want to give it a

voice all right almost done okay here we go y'all ready to see the new trailer let's compare it to the old one compare and contrast I'm not doing this to brag I I genuinely want to know is this better oh that's a cool shot I've never seen that one what that's not fair give me a sec oh the the trailer I downloaded is

different oh I haven't got I don't have that clip but anyway really good Clips here wait maybe I do no this trailer is no maybe I don't hold on where's the clip okay I guess I don't I don't have it okay so there's yeah this this [Music] one oh good they got voices there that's fun I like that Loop um that's really cool and then here's the one we we just edited let me zoom

in so ideally what we would do is double that length and just keep doing cuts of all the great footage that this game has so that's the idea that's that's kind of how I do trailers um let's go ahead and jump into the game game looks pretty fun uh let's go to our library here and take a look alien Black Ops that's so funny oh you were telling me that Mystic Mystic I can't read everything what's wrong with you you think I could just read the chat you know I don't read the chat

whoa can't have that that's so weird um what just happened oh I hate when this happens well that feels good this looks like clip art I would just have it say demo right here that that's really strange feels really good whoa whoa brilliant lots of settings here keypad Works keyboard Works let's do beginner for those ones who want to focus on Exploration with some combat fun UI feels great got some cool missions

here there we go this is great honestly really good menu systems clean UI is not terrible it's not amazing good morning Soldier I am Josh Stone the commander of this operation I was informed that you are one of the top five pilots in the Air Force and that is why you were requested for this Mission this is the briefing on the after a bizarre incident involving the fall of an object of known origin on this remote island in the Pacific Ocean a top secret military operation was established to recover the wreckage as we entered the island to retrieve the debris unidentified flying objects opened fire initiating an armed conflict against these beings there were several casualties on both sides soldiers sent out a distress call your mission is to locate and rescue them Intel confirms some of them were captured and are being held in an alien structure the door is the only weakness Point your proximity radar will Mark the location of soldiers in range stay sharp and watch those icons on your HUD do everything possible to eliminate the alien threat and recover their technology for reverse engineering you

could have said all that in maybe three sentences that was a lot um I don't like AI voices either can we can we not hire some people I know it it can be expensive I know but it's worth it uh it's really worth it if you have an extra like thousand bucks to hire some voice actors please do it all right let's go come on that I mean seriously though it's not it wasn't bad the the setup but imagine starting an a helicopter in midair whoa what whoa oh

no good morning Soldier I am Josh Stone the commander of this operation what the heck that's not the sound of a helicopter therey there it is okay so w is whoa that's sensitive inverted I did all this trailer work and the game is not reciprocating I did all that work I feel taken advantage of let me let me adjust the mouse sensitivity and see if that helps good morning Soldier I am Josh Stone the

commander of this operation I was informed no what is happening what is happening I mean it looks cool I I want it to be playable [Music] though we're gonna start this over I'm gonna give this game some time I think it was the mouse sensitivity that was the problem

okay why is this happening good morning Soldier I am Josh Stone okay start engine wait no no no I want to be able to invert it hang on let me go to the menu [Music] gentle I need to invert let me invert I seriously hang on what I can't invert it are you [Music]

serious no [Music] no [Music] really guys am I missing something here the commander of this operation I was informed that you are one of the top five pilots in the Air Force and that is why you were requested for this okay no that's how I go up why isn't that forward

[Music] [Music] good morning Soldier I am Josh Stone all [Music] right I would remove whatever okay press W to throttle up okay how do I go forward this just takes me up press a to turn left okay

good W Mike shut your mouth I think I understand it I think I get it I think I get it so tilting forward is how you go forward it's it's different than um like battle field this is interesting controls I will say guys don't you think that W should should be my pitch forward and s should be my pitch backwards so w is forward s is backwards D is turn right a is turned

left my mouse is for the the pitching up and pitching uh pitching up and pitching down right I'm going to keep playing this to prove good morning Soldier I am Josh Stone the commander of this operation look I'll show you I'll show you guys okay it looks great it sounds good so far so good it's so in order to go up maybe I'm wrong but in Battlefield in order to go up you just pitch up you and you fly forward but I understand it's a helicopter this is tough inverted to okay

[Music] [Music] what do that want me to do slow down moving the mouse ch [Music] I don't know what you want me to

do what is the m doing okay I don't know about that says I'm ready to Pilot the mission this is crazy controls I could be wrong here man whoa whoa come here come on come and get me like this game was made by an actual pilot help please help me please get in now

please get in now who I'm actually having a lot of fun whoa it's really hard come here help me come here please help me please come and get me oh no [Music] I tried I tried all right guys let's go ahead and

uh I think it's tuned for a controller but if I'm a steam player it should it should be it should be fine with a with a mouse and a keyboard but it probably is tuned for a controller um all right guys in the link in the description is it's time to vote go ahead and click the link below to vote for your favorite game as a review we've got Robin Hood shadow of notingham alien Black Ops on Steam and however you say it the theaster um go ahead and start your vote while you're voting I'm going to shill one more time if you want to check I'm serious though if you want to check out fulltime Game Dev it really is a great course um and uh by the way if you're a student let me know in the chat and let me know what

you think about the program if you're a student um you're going to learn everything I've learned in the last decade of making indie games um and for the if you're curious if you're curious here we've got Twisted Tower which is my current game I'm working on this one is my game that I'm working on with 3D Realms just to give give you some credibility here um as to maybe why you should trust me if you want to learn from me um this is some credibility here and uh you can check out the the demo if you want by the way how do I get to the demo did she reject your proposal oh yeah it's right here so 524 reviews 92% positive um and you bet I'm going to brag about this I've been working hard on this so I'm really really proud of this demo it's it's doing really really well 524 reviews in less than a week I don't like reading reviews right now because they stress me out but uh yeah it's looking good so far um so check it out below also have game called pinstripe Never song pinstripe and never

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GNA give my scores okay um I'm gonna say the best game was I'm gonna vote it's probably the however you say it thas th theaster this is probably the best game I don't know I say probably because I don't understand these games but it's clearly well made I mean it is it is phenomenally made um so that's probably the best one second place is probably alien Black Ops just because once they nail the controls it's actually going to be probably pretty fun um the controls are rough and those glitches at the end are not great um so that's probably second place and then Robin Hood is going to be third third place um but that's just my opinion we shall see I don't want to leave you guys too much room to change your vote So based on what I just said so I'm going to go ahead and take a look

really quickly at our um polls let's go ahead pull it up here so that's my vote I think it's going to be theaster is the first place alien Black Ops second place Robin Hood third place so let's go ahead and take a look yes correct um theaster in my opinion it should have won by 90% because it looks amazing and it plays amazing however I think a lot of US based on the poll from the chat it sounds like a lot of us just don't you know we don't play those kind of games because a lot I think it was 50% of you said you didn't play those or maybe it was 40% so that probably explains it I mean if if the seaster was not so dense and meta and was maybe I don't know a first-person shooter with that style I think it' be

overwhelming I'm not telling the developer to do that the developer is clearly has a passion for these kind of games and they should make it they should keep making it the way it is I don't I have no changes alien Black Ops it it was I mean I bet you if that game had better uh better controls and it wasn't so glitchy um and it was more accessible for people like me I think it would probably be it may have even won um Robin Hood I think has a lot of work a lot of work to to be done and I think that it feels very empty right now and I think that um it's probable that the Project's too big um I think it should be scaled down to be a a very small stealth game I would recommend using textures I understand stylized cell shaded is goal but I'm not sure it's serving the game well especially a medieval game with a serious tone I feel like there's a mismatch there um so I would recommend

using textures um maybe even going with a retro texture look similar to Thief imagine Thief but everyone's an animal you know if if that was the hook it would win like I love thief thief is awesome but imagine that game in a pixelated form but everyone plays as dogs and cats I but it's like it's takes itself seriously like that would be such a cool hook um and you're like Robin Hood but you're a dog you could call him a what if you're a robin what if it's a stealth game but you fly around as a robin and it's called Robin Hood um Thomas is way quiet for me why am I so quiet check 1212 check check check better better better um only 65 voted and we have 9917 people watching I understand that if you didn't see every game you don't feel comfortable voting but if you did see every game please go ahead and vote

um can you hear me now okay good good um so guys let let's let's do a little bit of review of this stream was it helpful to you guys it seems like people really enjoy these streams was this helpful to you guys did you learn anything um did you learn anything because I want to be I want I seriously I want you guys to learn a lot if you can um yeah I want I want to be helpful if I can to you guys so just let me know uh how these streams can help how it helped you what you want to see

differently and and we'll go from there stream was awesome as always okay good then we're ready to go bye just kidding um let's see here what else we got the video editing part was too long screw you I wanted to do that so that well the reason I did it is because I I get kind of obsessive with trailers um but you're right it was too long I'm sorry um cool you learned a lot from the you learned a lot from the spontaneous trailer dive that's good um yep yep yep let's see here Anders Edge you know that's that's uh it's it's always devastating it's it's always devastating when you test your game I got terrible reviews I dude to to sympathize with you I um I remember I I took my my daughter on

like a little daddy daughter date seriously I I want to I want to try to encourage you I took my daughter on a daddy daughter date about five months ago and I had just initiated the first testing for for Twisted Tower and I started getting feedback from a form that I sent like 20 testers every time I checked the form it was somebody going five out of 10 not for me not recommended unimpressive not it's it's it's not unique sucks just like what is happening I spent all this money three years working on this game and every time I and I shouldn't have been checking my phone that's that's why I told you I went on a daddy daughter date I was on a daddy daughter date and I was walking through Target cuz I wanted to get get my daughter like a like a Disney toy or something and I was just secretly looking at my phone and I was just like flushed red and

trembling three years of work hundreds of thousand dollars spent and people didn't like it and so I had to go in and you know what I figured out dude is I figured out that it was small tiny things that needed to be fixed if I told you you want a brand new car here's your brand new Jeep Grand Cherokee but it's neon yellow it's like oh crap everything's perfect except for that that color I I don't want to drive that I'm I'm embarrassed maybe some of you wouldn't be but I would be it's that kind of thing that can cause a game to completely collapse during a live stream like today's where it's like I need a map I need a map I have no idea where I'm going it's pretty straightforward give me a map now if you still get negative

comments Jeb it's okay buddy you don't need to bark if you still get negative comments then there's it's more of a problem than a map I I don't think your hook is there I don't think your hook is there um either so I being Robin Hood in an open world isn't enough you know you need to give me the hook immediately also like when when you um let's say the hook is Robin Hood stealth game you need to immediately give me stealth AKA start me in a dungeon um so show me the hook give me give me the goods immediately especially with a demo Jason said Jason said Thomas is basically you're saying this Jason's a by the way Jason is an awful person he's pretty mean pretty rude in General um but Jason said uh the demo was trash he basically said that I played the first demo current game is so much better uh Jason also says he wants a

neon yellow car well I think Jason is um of course you do of course you do um let's see here uh regardless how negative feedback is it might make sense to look behind it to figure out the problem I get pissy when my game jams aren't good um so hey I wanted I want to end with this guys there's nothing more devastating than having somebody play your game and so to to for those of you who opted in to have me play that game play your game it takes serious guts to to let someone do that it's very very hard and very scary um I can't actually in my opinion there's nothing scarier than having someone play your game because

well people are critical in their nature we're we're very critical especially game devs we're very critical of each other and it's just G to suck like it just sucks having people play your game just sucks sucks I avoid the steam page at all cost I look at what I do with Twisted Tower right now is if we take a look at Twisted Tower here all I look at is this I look at the average averages are so important and I know by the way I know why why 8% uh downvoted this game it's because of the performance uh we're I'm still figuring out the frame rate issues but look I could go to pinstripe and I can say what kind of garbage are people saying about this game um you know what's so funny is

uh what's his uh Jim Sterling Jim Sterling was like um loved this game because of the the dialogue but I bet you we can find reviews where people are like the dialogue is immature and stupid um the usual boring stuff we've seen a billion [Laughter] times pinstripe is made to be something akin to Pennywise but it's nothing more than a Petula incel everything in this game is broken um I tried loving this game let's see do we have any dialogue issues people hate the dialogue feels like a high budget Flash game overuses fart noises for no reason um shows lack of care look at all

this people hate this game oh they hate it they hate it oh why Lord why why me they hate my and you realize oh number one it's not everybody and number two um lots of other positives so it's funny though if you just sort by negative it's just so devastating where look at this it's a bit like Coraline with an additional sprinkle of Christianity and toilet humor how about next time I'll just sprinkle in some uh atheism for you would you like that it's a very simple short game in essence it's

okay okay I'm going to have to go and cry for a little bit you know this game actually is kind of dumb um but I'm not going to read the Twisted Tower reviews because I'm still working on it this is long gone I broke up with her like seven years ago um there will never be a game with only positive reviews I mean let's see how undertale is doing right now that's 96% wow 4% of people said undertale was not worth their money that's wild um one game that I was actually really impressed I was cultic this is one of my buddy games Jason Smith look at this 98% can you

imagine this is 96% oh look you're not so clever after all Jason no I'm kidding um guys I want to tell you about Twisted Tower um Twisted Tower we I I can't tell how many wish lists we have it's not me who's saying it I just don't think 3D Realms wants to share it but I think we got over 20,000 wish lists in the last week um which is awesome you know so cool Tien says Thomas I think I got you beat you've never been threatened in your game reviews no I maybe not I mean I haven't read a lot of them um you know what you you know what I really avoid this tab right here I don't go there I know I should but I don't I don't go here

um so it's because it's a place it's kind of like Reddit you you enter Reddit and you go hello hello hello hello and then you hear get out of here you motherfu that is Reddit you try to post one thing and and everyone freaks out um TM game says I'm in there consistently it's a great way to find bugs yeah what if I don't want to find bugs right now Mr EA says Reddit and Steam Reviews are practically one and the same um Reddit is the eyes of Darkness

staring at you while you're naked wow that is that's a good that's a good way to put it oh yes that's my Reddit nutshell experience in a nutshell Reddit is full of people who just know it all isn't that funny uh Twitter is a place where you scream at each other about politics um and conspiracy theories Reddit is a place for um actually actually that's Reddit um Instagram is hey guys what's up if you check swipe up if you want to check out hey guys have you seen this cool new hey by the way guys this is how I raise my kids are you a bad parent here are five reasons why you're not a bad parent and then YouTube is like the best um and what else Facebook is uh parents oh son son take a look at this let me turn it up for you as loud as possible son son that's

Facebook um I don't know anything about Tik Tok I avoid Tik Tok all right guys I think that's everything for today oh Anders Edge new plan quit internet find cave return to hunter gatherer yeah um hey guys check out fulltime G below if you want to learn what well Bart learned Chris learned um all these reviews here everflux games they all went full-time with the help of the course um sutar did Antonio did Thomas Stewart did this course really is helpful um you've got five days left or depending on when you click the link excuse me I'm burping 25% off um and by the way if you're a student let me know in the chat I will look at the chat I promise if you're a student let me know what you think about the program Thomas why do you shill this course why do you do ad reads on your live streams because it supports the channel um it supports the podcast supports the channel um when you guys enroll in this

course um and it means the world to me but more importantly it will help you you're going to learn how to get funding just like I've gotten funding I've been funded three times um by different Publishers three or four it's four but the first one was a bad deal so I don't even count that one because I had to buy the game back um Kickstarter as well been funded by Kickstarter hit the steam front page multiple times um so check it out below all right guys I love you so so oh you learn how to make games too gdau Unity unreal whichever engine you want to learn you'll learn how to do it 2D or 3D development so check it out below Did anyone say they're a student let me see here um please don't remove the stream okay sorry I won't uh Thomas doesn't read super chats much I I don't love the idea of people pay for my attention to be completely honest with you J Stewart says I'm a student and I'd love to see more advanced engine topics covered got it noted and we do update the course throughout the year um Thomas

do you have video editing content in the full-time Game Dev yeah we we have I have a trailer lecture where I I teach about all that trailer stuff um very good very good uh upcoming sales in the future I'm I'm not sure when the next sale is going to be um cool cool cool I like the way you handle the stream Thomas good good good I'm trying to shout on any students if we've got any students because I said I would um my game received around 9,000 wish list this is from Hassan 9,000 wish list from the demo drop but the reviews are mixed I made a lot of changes and improvements for the full version using the reviews but reviews really demoralized me I bet um Anders Ed says I'm a student but apparently I wasn't paying attention

um cool oh okay mil mil whz says I'm a student it helped a lot I'm working on my first game cool cool who taught you how to Dev when you started this is from vendel who taught you how to Dev when you first started me I didn't I didn't learn from anybody and I know that sounds cocky I know I'm just telling you how it is I just learned from myself the best way to learn is to have an idea and then pursue that idea because you're motivated by the idea if it's a tutorial it's it's a little bit harder um all right this was super duper fun um oh I have a multi stream here what is

that any other questions guys you ever think about running a game Jam yeah I I am I'm gonna say something that's really annoying are you ready I'm very busy any anything else guys if I have a banger trailer where do I drop it everywhere Twitter Youtube Instagram Reddit imer steam email drop it everywhere email IGN do everything um okay make the ping pong project you always hated make a ping pong project advice well Elon just released grock 2 is it grock 2 and it made pong or no it made it made uh asteroids in like a

second whatever that asteroid game is all right can you clip the helic copter play today and re-upload no Impressions and thoughts about blue sky I I'm not bothered by Twitter like a lot of people so I'm just I'm on Twitter I get great traction on Twitter guys of course it's going to be political of course people are going to say things you don't like but it's just Twitter it's okay it's just the way it is it's social media people are going to piss you off they're going to say things you don't agree with and that's okay um I I was always against you know when people were trying to flee Twitter six years ago when when uh the rightwing was trying to flee Twitter and then now it's the left that's trying to flee Twitter um and make their own platform

and I'm just like you know it's social media so just like you know people are going to say things you don't like and be nasty and say horrible awful things but that's the way it goes um anything else going back to working on my game now dang this stuff is getting fantastic that's from Jay Stewart your flight experience is on the internet now Thomas it's our content hey pinks who what game did you make um thank you for playing you gave me several insights and a few fixes to do the first one will be adding a UI option to control mouse yes 1,000% and also inverted Mouse controls by default locked in are you kidding me I'm not training for the Air Force am I but panks I actually really liked your game I thought it was cool and I hope I hope you learned a lot from the trailer as well um anything else guys anything

else are go are you going to use a team for your next game or stay single well I'm not single I'm married anything else do a podcast with David wayy again in the future um I I thought about that yesterday actually I I I love my conversation with David David's actually one of my favorite people and I actually consider him I hope he doesn't isn't weirded out by this I consider him my um one of my best friends in the Game Dev world I mean I I just really like David um no say says it will be too much work to make my first game very interactive and full of choices yes too much uh

probably um the noow says I have a question well you already lost my attention because you need to just ask the question Eduardo says you crack me up hahaa um how many hours is it to go through the full course it's like 40 hours 45 hours um I always say this with anybody who buys the course it is not something you just get done in a day it's supplemental it's it's it's stuff you need to go through slowly throughout the year throughout the development of your game it's there it's almost like a Bible you know it's something that you can always reference and and um go through in your at your own leisure in your own time uh how do I feel about the PSX style I think it's I love it but I I think it it's not particularly um unique

anymore uh by that how many hours of videos yeah 45 hours of video in the course yeah and then there's also like five bonus courses so it's another like 20 hours it's great content it really is David really seems like a humble guy yeah he's faking the turtle tank you should try to get braies or Code Monkey on the podcast oh that's a great idea anything else guys and I'm kidding about David he truly is humble his humility comes from um probably a similar place of mind which is just I and I I know I come across sarcastic and proud but I I'm one of the most self-defeating people I know I'm very insecure I'm one of the most insecure people I know and it yeah so my my humility or like my willingness to listen and take advice is it comes from a place of just feeling like really inadequate I I feel inadequate all day and I can put on and I can be really like sarcastic and blunt on camera and

come across confident but all day all night I feel pretty pretty insecure most time most of the time um would you ever consider switching from Unity no you and Code Monkey started with flash right yes I did Daniel Mullins was would be an amazing guest who's Daniel Mullins Daniel Mullins let me take a look Daniel Mullins he's a steam developer he made Pony Island 2 Panda circus let me show you guys who this person is do you want to see if they'll come on let's see what's this whoa this looks freaking

awesome Daniel Mullins let's get him on the podcast you guys want to do it with me really quick what I'm gonna have you guys do and this is how we're gonna get Daniel mullen's attention okay Daniel Mullins how do you spell it m m u l l i ns there he is we're going to follow him and the way we're gonna get his attention is do you guys are you on Twitter anybody on Twitter I'm going to Tweet this my audience right now during a stream said they want you to come on the podcast want to want to come on the podcast all right guys go ahead and um head on over to this tweet and reply and say something like yes please or we want

it we want it or yay yay yay please please please please please or we beg you or uh Thomas is a great guy or come on let's go bro or yes yes yes or can we do this now can we do this do this for him do this for him do this for him make happen make it happen make it happen something like that so let's see here I'm going to refresh the page I expect to see some comments ready and go really really guys are you serious you're not going to support me in my career are you serious I think it's a real shame that you're not doing okay we got a comment I I I cannot believe you're not supporting me yo please okay Milt G way to go bro this would be fantastic Josh way to go

bro Josh are you in the chat Josh is in the chat Josh Mr Chambers Josh are you in the chat Josh there is Mr Chambers hey guys if you haven't followed Mr Chambers on YouTube you should he's the best I love me some Josh yeah yeah yeah please yes all right good yes please okay I'll give you a little like Josh do I follow you yeah of course I do all right what what else we got here anything else guys simmering Studio says where's the post go to replies here and it's right

here yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah please yes I claim the idea and support it Mike was that your idea do it I'll take it probable spam anything please please please don't prove I'm right that would be really cool to see this is called spamming people and it's one of my greatest uh marketing efforts oh man oh my word poor guy okay what else we got here what's on Twitter look at all these cool submissions one of the best things happened yesterday guys let me show you do you guys see this crap look at this hang

on he did and now it's gone there it is look at this guys this was one of the greatest crowning achievements of my entire life I will take it Ken and I will frame it Ken Ken I know I know that you think about me on a daily basis I can tell all right so pestering people is the key to success noted hey let's see if you responded he's going to wake up and be like what [Laughter] what oh man this is hilarious how to get someone on the podcast I'm gonna sell a

course how to how to get someone on a podcast Pro it's only going to be $700 and the first lecture is going to be called have a lot of people in a live stream please feed me daddies like like like like he's going to be so confused oh yeah Thomas brush is an [Music] extremely I agree oh man that's funny um I love it you guys I'm having fun today with you 1,041 viewers I will take it that is way more than I'm used to um you know me just celebrity streamer over

here what else we got on Twitter I'm waiting for some big YouTubers like real big YouTubers to play Twisted Tower this was a really cool stream though this one with uh I don't know how to say it ver speles G I'm done spending up it's a a German streamer really really fun um you know what's funny is the stream here says 291 watching on YouTube but we've got it says a thousand from God knows where I mean and maybe it's Twitter that's what I'm saying my views on Twitter are wild like the engagement look at this 106,000 views on X from the from the trailer drop which was February 12th so that's not even

let's see here a week a week goes by and I've got 106,000 views for the trailer and it's not even like it's not even like it's fake views like Rumble that's all like Rumble views are insane but um like they they make no sense um but when it comes to uh YouTube um look let's look at the views The View count on YouTube and see if the the comments are comparable on YouTube the Twisted Tower demo launch trailer is 36,000 views which I would prefer more honestly with 445 comments so let's see here yeah so actually it looks like the these views views are actually at 25% as valuable as YouTube so we basically got 400 views here on YouTube 36,000 views so we've got 25% of

the views but two 400% of the comments is that correct am I correct in my math there um so it looks like these these comments are or these views are about 25% the value of YouTube I just I'm throwing that number out randomly um Josh says that uh Twitter's algorithm being more like Tik Tok has made my feed way worse but game marketing is way better I agree my game marketing has been wild um been been getting some really good traction on stuff um really good comments like I I I I let's see here look at this 5.6 th000 views 21 comments for just saying I'm going to launch the brave boy demo I don't know it's good con I I feel like it's been great

um oh this one was awesome this is one of my favorite ones home water filtration system costs including installation tap below to oh he's got oh they have Loot on them this is exciting day because we got to unfold one of these units who are you hey that's unnecessary that is unnecessary what's up guys and welcome to Twisted Tower a brand new horror game where we go to a theme park full of mascot Killers I'm thinking Disney World but Mickey Mouse turned into a horrifying monster that wants to kill us we're going to go and go into this today's video but here's the deal this is only a demo so let me know if you guys want to see me play the full release when it's out anyways let's go and press play and hop in all right claim your ticket all right I'll take ticket number one why not for silus London 1945 oh bro Silas is my son my beautiful boy he's not old enough to play this game I didn't realize we were going to London things have changed since the

wall while you were away I met someone whose established position promises a steady future what you left me you she left me I went to war and she leaves me win treasure beyond measure all right forget her buddy we're going for the treasure we're going for a new booty all right and it's the treasure at this theme park Twisted Tower whoa wait this is like Bioshock o it's funny how if you're in a boat automatically considered guys I will be honest with you I was terrified that like Ken LaVine would be offended that I took a lot of inspiration from Bioshock but he loved it and he and he uh he he retweeted the demo and I thought that was really cool um but the

thing about Bioshock is I think it's old enough to go Bioshock Vania you know or a genre Bioshock is a genre or a shock game you know it's it's an immersive Sim with pretty straightforward Gunplay in a dilapidated world that's from like the 50s um and I'm hopeful that that it's a genre at this point and you can we can just take inspiration from the game showed up all right here we go I'm excited I heard this is very um Bioshock e so I'm excited oh here we are baby the Twisted Tower isn't there there's a thing called like the Tower of Terror right when I went there with doco yeah um they went on that and I was like nope Touch the Clouds of your imagination I don't ride roller coasters dco and my brother when we went um we went to like Universal and Disney and stuff they did all that and I was just like I'll just along for the ride you know what's this

tickets nice dude what the hell is this place buddy it's called bee park or you've been living under a stone my guy Buddy's Patrick Star give me Twisted Mallet handy can Bonk somebody with this bad boy it's definitely going to hurt why am I collecting tickets for there's got to be a shop somewhere what is that little weasel hey there he is where is the chat what in the offbrand Freddy Fazbear was that that was definitely a bear of what the heck climb to the top Brave and clever claim the treasure yours forever sign oh wait were you going to say something about that an old sign yeah go on climb to the top Brave and clever climb the treasure gos forever I didn't know you were going to read that I would let you do it but Mr Twister welcomes you ooh Crouch hold on let me break these oh oh hey what are you doing get down from there oh my that was I think that was the guy that we saw at the start that showed up for like a

second game saved give me these can I smash oh I knew dude I knew they they had that attention to detail dude I could just tell oh hey oh it's a little Freddy Fazbear looking guy die oh my wait H don't know what Freddy Fazbear is I swear to you I don't know what his what that is he's called Huggy Bear I've heard that so many times I don't know what it is and also car I like how he kill him steal the tickets from his pocket don't even care dude you're a liar you've heard of it all right so that's a Huggy Bear no I swear like Huggy wuggy mixed with Freddy Fazbear if you think about it not at all actually who's that guy welcome to the Twisted tower for your eldest dreams will Bloom and flower cruly HS and wonders Grand you'll squeal for more at my command and if you reach the top tonight the treasure May steal Charlotte's heart outright yes tiny we know all about

Charlotte what how do you know that who are you how do he know that wait oh my gosh dude they thought of everything I did you're right this game is incredible oh thank you was that I'll take kid all right let's do this where's this taking me oh oh another new character is that me voice acting no I am not doing voice acting for this game in fact I I was in this game a lot there was like three characters that were my voice and I I got rid of them all actually so my voice acting isn't in this game at all cool cool I I hired the voice acting from voices.com how do I get through open up thank you whoever's controlling that more tickets win win what oh my win her back um whoa that's her dude why do you

have a picture of my wife you're the guy not your wife she's your she's your fian I need to make it clear I think I'm going to use like artifacts or something to say like no no no no no dummy I'm just kidding it's your fiance um hence the engagement read box but at least some people think it's uh didn't they had no idea that you got um abandon or broken up with come here dang it oh now this is open H wait what oh loading screen I just passed out oh the upgrade guy is me you're right you're right what are you doing oh you're dead oh you're missing your head happen here what does that say is mine what is mine oh the money is mine buddy I'm not here for money all right I'm here for my wife what is that that's got to be a safe spot right it has to be if this

isn't a safe spot then what is it it's locked oh it's just like a door we had to get through all right guess I got to find a key ride me hide me ride me or hide me it says one of the two oh hey there oh no way this is the a star are you sure about that oh my gosh yes was like the upgrade station wait we have other weapons no bye guys love you